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PostSubject: The Final Strike   Thu Apr 19, 2012 7:26 pm

Here it is. You have waited. For a long time. Now, I have begun. This, is "Jurassic Park: The Final Strike", the sequel to "Lone Survivor: Jurassic Park". Enjoy your reading, and look out for the raptors!

PROLOGUE

In 1993 a genetics company named InGen succeeded in cloning prehistoric creatures from the Mesozoic era to place in a theme park to be named "Jurassic Park". Of course, they needed to perfect their creations before the park could be opened to the public. So, they went through any "versions" of the animals. With each new version, older obsolete versions needed to be exterminated. These animals were sent to a secret location in the Appalachian mountains, where they could be humanely put down. However, early in 1993, a massive catastrophe occurred. While being moved into a new enclosure before euthinization, 3 animals escaped, killing 3 people, including a 13 year old and his father. Two of the animals were killed, the other still stalks the forest. And the mystery of what killed the men was never solved. Until now.

Chapter One: Going Home

Jacob walked out of his dorm room, carrying his belongings. 3 suitcases, a backpack, and a few other items had him barely standing up under all the weight. Just as he nearly tripped, his girlfriend, Jennifer, showed up and helped him by picking up 2 of the suitcases. Jacob looked up, saw her face, and smiled. "What are you still doing here? I thought you had already left", he asks her. "Well, I left some makeup and stuff in my dorm room, and I came to see if you were still here. Luckily, I saw you struggling to come out of your room with your bags so I came and helped you", Jennifer says, smiling and giggling. "I was not struggling! I was just-" "Save it!" she cuts him off and they share a short kiss. "Well, I gotta go now. My mom's waiting in the car outside. See ya next week Jacob!" "Bye Jen!" he replies as she leaves the building. The conversation leaves Jacob uplifted, and, with his extra energy, he continues to trek to his car.

Jacob is 20 years old and goes to the ITT Tech in Athens, Georgia for becoming a detective. Its been his life long dream to become a detective, since he has a strong feeling for justice. But the real fuel for being a forensics expert. The real reason is because of an event that happened to his brother and father when he was just 7 years old. He didn't remember much, but based on his family, he knows some of the story. His father worked for InGen, a genetics company. It is now widely known that the company cloned prehistoric animals from DNA found in amber, which was revealed when a tyrannosaurus rampaged through downtown San Diego in 1997. All he knows is that one day, his father and brother, Robby, went there, and there was an accident and both his father and brother were pronounced dead from an animal attack., though no official culprit was announced. Since then, he has made it his duty to discover what happened.

Jacob himself is 6 foot and 1 inch tall, which is rather tall for his family. He made it through middle and high school with straight A's and being in Advanced Placement classes, which a road his deceased brother was also going down. He was also valedictorian of his high school senior class. He is about average, weighing 169 pounds. He is known in his college classes as "one of the hottest guys on campus" and is a constant hub for fellow female students. Though, Jennifer is the only one who has appealed to him and have been together for 11 months. He is generally a very outgoing and uplifting person who does his best to please.

After a hour long drive, he arrives at his home, where his mother awaits on her front porch. Summer vacation has begun for his college, so he decided to come home with his lonesome mother. He sees her as often as he can, since she lives on a large plot of land all by herself since her husband was killed. He carries his many bags one by one out of the trunk of his 2004 Ford Explorer. After he places all of his belongings in his old bedroom, which hasn't changed since he last left it, he returns to his mother and hugs her. After a small conversation and hellos, they quietly sit down and watch some TV. After a while of watching the local news, he asks her. "Mom, there is another reason I came back home. Now that I have learned much more about forensics, I have decided I should start my investigation. I am going to find out what happened to dad and Robby."

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Strike   Thu Apr 19, 2012 8:44 pm

Finally, it has arrived!

Great stuff Pokes!

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Strike   Thu Apr 19, 2012 9:02 pm

I'm liking this so far! Especially this moment at the end where you give it that quiet moment. Not the sort of pause-moment you usually see in most JP fics, thought it gave it some really nice dimension there. I would be very interested in reading more!

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Strike   Wed Apr 25, 2012 5:09 pm

Chapter Two: The Reveal

Jacob's mom stared at him for a few moments. Then, she hugged him and began to sob. Jacob wrapped his arm's around his mom until the crying subdued. Finally she pushed away. "Sorry, its just that you seem so much like your father. Always trying to do whats right, even if it sounds crazy", she tells him, still quavering a bit. This highly confuses Jacob. This is not the reaction he expected to the slightest. "Mom, what do you-" she cuts him off. "It doesn't matter. I knew all along this is what you have been planning, so I prepared myself for when you decided it was time to do this. What do I think? Your chasing nothing. It was an animal. That's it Jacob. I know you think it was something else entirely, but that is all. You think too hard!" she begins to yell. "But Mom, I KNOW it wasn't any ordinary animal. The evidence is there, no bear or cougar would be able to do the damage done to them! They even know that Robby had been running for days on end, meaning that whatever attacked him was STALKING him! Its so clear tha-" he realizes his mom is crying again. "Wait mom, I didn't mean to bring all this back up on you", he says. But it's too late, and she is walking back to her bedroom sobbing. He realizes he can't take anything back. He also knows that he can't give up his search. This was his fuel to become what he is. Jacob already planned a meeting with his friends in a coffee shop downtown at 5 o'clock PM to set up their plan and what they have so far. He looks at his mom's old clock on the wall, and sees it's already 4:25. He realizes he doesn't have time to condone his mother. So he decides to write a note explaining things to her before he leaves. He writes "Mom, I know I may have hurt you bringing all these things up again, and I know you don't want me looking for something that you don't think is there. But I feel it's my duty to discover what happened, at all costs. I'm going to town to meet up with some of my friends so we can put our heads together. I'll be back at around 9 or 10 tonight. Bye".
He makes his way to the local coffee shop, where he find's all his friends there already waiting. For whatever reason which even he can't make out, they believe him in that there is something we don't know that is the reason for his father and brother's death. When he walks in his friends, as well as everyone else in the coffee shop, are glued to the TV's, which are showing a news broadcast. He slowly sits down while watching the news reporter. "A few days ago, two hikers were walking along the Appalachian Trail when they saw four unidentified animals walking in the woods nearby. One of the hikers was able to pull out their camera and take a few photo's of the creatures. If you look at them now" *pictures appear onscreen* "you will see that they don't look right to fit any known animals. Some skeptics believe this is just mis-identification, or a hoax. This sighting coincides with many others, including farmers who's livestock are disappearing. You decide for yourself. Coming after the break, local man saves dog stuck in pipe, and warm weather up in the 90's is heading our way." The television cuts to a commercial. A few jokes are said around the bar, such as a man saying "I don't care what that is, there is nothing scarier than my ex-wife!" and a few laughs are tossed around. Soon everyone is back to what they were doing. Jacob and his friends turn back around to the table they are positioned at. Jacob's friends greet him, and then they decide to talk about what they just saw. "Man, thats creepy stuff. Is it just me, or did that thing look like a velociraptor?" says his best-friend Cole. "Yeah, it looked that way to me too. Its also strange how these sighting appeared right after your dad and brother died. Dinosaurs=InGen if you ask me", says his other friend, Savannah, who is the only girl in the group. "Wait! Say that again Savannah", says Jacob swiftly as a thought occurs to him. "Uh, I said Dinosaurs=InGen. You know, the company that cloned dinosaurs?" she replies confused. But Jacob isn't. A thought occurs to him that he can't believe never occurred to him. InGen's cloned dinosaurs. His dad worked for InGen. Dinosaurs killed is father. This thought is the match that lights the fire.

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Strike   Wed Apr 25, 2012 5:52 pm

Pfft. Dinosaurs? What a load of sensationalist hooey.

Nice chapter Pokes Wink

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Strike   Wed Apr 25, 2012 6:07 pm

Thanks Theta. Now you just have to wait till next Wednesday for Chapter 3

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Strike   Thu May 03, 2012 4:54 pm

Chapter 3: Solving the Puzzle

Jacob's friends looked at him with very confused faces on their heads. "Don't you get it! One of, well, hopefully only one of, the animals ESCAPED! That's what the 'accident' was all along! The animal, or animals, is what caused the unidentified mauling, that's what stalked Robby, and that's what happened!" exclaimed Jacob happy he, after a somewhat quick investigation, had figured out what had been on his mind for years. This also meant he had another investigation to do. He needed to find that InGen complex and visit the site that changed his families life forever. Also, if the animals(s) escaped there, it is most likely part of their territory, so he would have to be extra careful to not run into one. But that was a bridge he would cross when he got there.
"Savannah and Cole, I need you two to go and gather any information you can from InGen sources so we can find the location of the facility. It would be to dangerous to go out there looking randomly, since my phone is Verizon and I get barely any coverage here," Jacob tells them. They nod and he looks over to the other friend, who has been very quiet. "Colby, I need you to get some equipment for our search. You know, camera's, FLIR, maps, GPS, ect". Colby quickly nods. "Alright guys, lets meet up here tomorrow with all our stuff. Got it?' says Jacob, in which everyone agrees. Soon they are all gone. Jacob leaves after them, and arrives home, to such a horrific sight, he cannot even bear it. He stands at the door, staring at the bloody 2 toed footprints leading to a broken window. "MOM!" he yells as he runs to her room, where he stops at the bedroom door, and doesn't take another step. Now the investigation was personal.
The emotional pain was indescribable. He felt disoriented as he headed for the phone to call 911. Just as he got to the phone, he heard an extremely loud screech that sounded like no other. He turned around, and what he saw scared him to death. A 6 foot tall scaled creature stood a few feet behind him. It looked exactly like the ones he saw on the video from the hikers on the news. He looked at its toes, teeth, and claws and saw the blood dripping from them. He new this is what had killed his mother. He backed up as it walked slowly towards him, as if it were hunting him. He looked around the room to see if he could find anything to defend himself with. After a few seconds he saw it. A few feet away from him he saw the half open silverware drawer, where there were a large amount of steak knifes. But he doubted he could get there quick enough if he ran. He decided he would have to back up slowly and get them before the raptor struck. After a few seemingly endless seconds he got to the drawer. The raptor realized he was cornered, so it picked up its pace to a slow trot, then a gallop, as it drew a few feet away. Jacob grabbed the two sharpest and longest knives and held them up in front of him. The raptor leaped in the air with astonishing agility, and as it closed in on Jacob, Jacob thrust his arms backwards and then threw one at the animals neck and thrust the other arm forward forward, jabbing the animal in the heart and neck. The velociraptor instantly fell backwards on the ground. Before Jacob could land another strike, the animal picked itself back up and wobbled its way quickly out the front door, and began making strange calls. Suddenly more calls were returned, and Jacob realized there were more of them. More than he could take care of. He swiftly grabbed his cellphone off the counter and lied the knives back down. He ran as fast as he could out the door, and got in his car. He turned the key and when the headlights came on, he saw 4 more raptors appear, while the one he had wounded was now on the ground nearby bleeding to death. All of them screeched and he thrust the gear into reverse and backed out of his driveway. He looked in his rear-view mirror and saw the raptors chasing him. He changed gears again and he sped off going 30 miles an hour. Raptors were still on his tail. 40 miles an hour, and the raptors were still chasing him! 50, 60 miles an hour! Finally, once he hit 70 the raptors slowed down and turned back and re-entered the shrubs next to the road. He gave a sigh of relief. Then he heard another screech, but this time it was inside the car! He turned and saw the figure in the back seat. "HOLY Crap!" he yelled as he lost control of the car, causing it to swerve and roll out of control and do several flips into the roadside ditch. As the world faded away, the last thing he heard and saw were sirens and flashing blue and red lights. A few men yelled "He's alive! Get the med squad now!" and then black.

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Strike   Thu May 03, 2012 4:57 pm

I liked the part where the cake ate Timon.

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Strike   Thu May 03, 2012 5:11 pm

Hey, really good chapter again, Pokes Smile
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Strike   Thu May 03, 2012 5:12 pm

Thanks Klausi, and thanks (I think?) Theta. Now for next Wednesday...

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Strike   Thu May 03, 2012 5:27 pm

@Pokesaurus wrote:
Now for next Wednesday...

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Strike   Thu May 10, 2012 6:03 pm

Chapter 4: The Hospital

Beep-Beep-Beep-Beep. That was what he heard when he finally awoke. It sounded like monitors. He slowly opened his eyes and all he saw was a white roof. He sat up slowly, and looked around. Heart monitors, stethoscopes, rubber glove boxes sitting on a counter top. The room was squeaky clean. It took him a moment to realize he was in a hospital. At first he couldn't remember what had happened. Then the memories faded back. He had found his half eaten mother, an image he would never forget, lying in her bed, when a raptor had cornered him. He killed it, and when he escaped in his car from the other raptors, one was in the backseat, which caused him to swerve out of control and crash into a ditch. After a few moments sitting up in bed, a nurse walked into the room. She was looking at a clipboard when she walked in, and was slightly startled to see Jacob awake. "Oh hi! My names Clarissa. I was just in here to check up on you, and it appears your awake. Boy are you all over the news! I'll go get Dr. Gilmore to check on you. He'll be here ASAP," she said, and she walked out with a smile on her face. All over the news? He looked at the bedside counter and picked up a TV remote, and turned the TV, which hung on the wall, on and changed the channel to the local news. "In other news, still no word from Walton Regional Medical Center, where a man, who's identity has not been released, was admitted after a near fatal car crash 3 nights ago, and many people believe if it were not for the police officer who had been following him for speeding, he would have died. We will update you with this developing story as news arrives. In other news, a startling number of animal attacks have been occurring throughout the upper state, and experts are baffled of why and what is causing these attacks". He turned the TV off, and a few seconds later, a short old man wearing as white lab coat and white hair walked in.

"Hello, my name is Doctor Gilmore. I see you have recovered well from you injuries. How are you feeling?" he asked as he came and started looking at some bruises and cuts on his arm. "Well, I'm groggy and sore all over. Does anyone I know know I'm here?" asked Jacob. "Well, since we haven't ID'd you yet, we haven't known who to call. So whats your name? Age?" said the doctor asking series of questions to ID him, while he jotted down Jacob's answers on his notepad. Eventually, the doctor said he had asked enough, and he would return later. After a few minutes, three policeman walked in, and they had serious looks on their faces. "Since you have recovered enough, they finally let us in so we can interrogate you. You know why your lucky? The fact you were going 20 miles above the speed limit saved your life and endangered you. Be lucky one of our cops was about to pull you over when it happened. Anyways, to the point, why were you going so fast that night? Had you been drinking, drugs, anything like that?" asked the biggest officer. "No sir, I don't drink or do drugs. It was a velociraptor that caused me to crash. I was speeding to escape the others that were chasing my car," said Jacob without any true emotion in his voice. "A whatiraptor?" asked the cop. "A dinosaur," said Jacob. "Your telling me, you were chased by dinosaurs?" he asked. Then, he and the other officers began to laugh. After a few moments they stopped. "Look son, I don't know what your trying to pull on us, but lucky for you we don't have enough evidence to charge you with anything more than a speeding ticket. But I'd like to-" he was cut off by a call on his radio for him. "Officer Jackson, we have another animal attack victim near your location. We need you to check it out" said the woman over the radio. "Alright. Come on guys, lets go check this out. You are one lucky son of a gun" he said to Jacob as he and the other officers left the room. A few short moments later the doctor returned. "Well, it looks like your good to go. No major cuts, bruises, or bleeding. You just got to sign a few forms and we can discharge you. Also, the police returned some of the undamaged items, like your cell phone and wallet, so you can get them back as well," said the doctor cheerfully. ""I'll be back with the forms and your items", he said as he left the room. Only a few seconds later he was back with the forms. Once Jacob finished signing them, they unhooked him and gave him his clothes he had been wearing the night of his accident, freshly washed. He went down the hallway and soon was at the front door of the hospital. He walked outside and looked in the bag of his remaining items. His cellphone was in perfect condition, and he must have turned it off before the accident, because when he turned it back on the battery was nearly full. He looked and decided he would call his girlfriend to come and pick him up. On the phone she sounded so worried and sorry for him. Once they were done, she had agreed to come and get him. 30 minutes later, she pulled up and he got in the car. He buckled his seat belt, and he began to tell her what happened, as she drove off to take him home, where she had heard they had found his mother.

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Strike   Thu May 10, 2012 6:07 pm

This is a really good fourth chapter, Pokes. Keep it up!
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Strike   Fri May 11, 2012 11:36 am

Yup, great chapter as always Pokes.

Still no mention of Mr. Cake yet though.

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Strike   Thu May 24, 2012 7:35 pm

Okaty guys, I regret to inform you this, but until further notice, this fanfic will be on hiatus. I am in a writers block, ect. But don't worry, I hopefully will rebegin writing next week.

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Strike   Thu May 24, 2012 9:10 pm

You just don't want me to see the cake... Mad

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Strike   Sat May 26, 2012 4:50 pm

All right, no problem, Pokes, take your time. Better a good chapter than something quick Wink
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PostSubject: Re: The Final Strike   Wed Jun 13, 2012 11:10 pm

Good news everyone! Next week I will be releasing the next chapter! This fic is no longer postponed!

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Strike   Thu Jun 14, 2012 5:34 pm

Cakes. Daleks. Things that aren't the aforementioned items. All to come in the the next exciting installment!

In all seriousness though, looking forward to it Pokes! Smile

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Strike   Sat Aug 04, 2012 12:59 am

After nearly a 3 month haitus, I present to you..... THE NEWEST CHAPTER OF THE FINAL STRIKE!!!

Chapter 5: Entering the Forest

For the next few weeks Jacob stayed at his girlfriend's house. Her parents found him a delight and decided he could stay, as long as he didn't do anything too serious with their daughter. After a few weeks of physical therapy and rehabilitation, he was finally fully healthy and stable. A few days later, he went to hear his mother's will, in which he received the house, which was payed for, as well as 1.5 million dollars to help with college and the extra he could use himself. He quickly gathered up his money, and his friends, and turned his mother's bedroom into a detective lab, with high tech equipment such as a flat-screen TV, a Macbook Pro for work, and others. Once they finished putting the room together, they talked.

"Okay guys", Jacob said "Since I had a car accident from being chased by the velociraptors, which I hope you guys believe me on, I gave you guys plenty of more time to do some research and gather equipment. Savannah and Cole, I hope you guys came close to finding some info about where the location of the building may be?". "Even better Jacob, we found it! Using addresses I found, some contacts, and others, we were able to pin-point the building's location on Google Earth!" Cole says excitedly. He pulls out his laptop, which has Google Earth showing the building. There was a big InGen logo on an archway. "It looks like its out in the middle of no-where. Can you get directions?" asked Jacob. "Well, it looks like workers left by helicopters to get to and from the site. So either we organize a chopper flight, or we can drive off-road through the woods" Savannah says. "Well", Jacob replies " It appears people across the state are getting attacked by these raptors, and the quicker we get rid of them, the sooner people will be safe and not have to loose someone like I did. It may take weeks to organize a helicopter in, and if the helicopter leaves us unattended, we would be up the creek without a paddle, and we could be attacked without any escape. Obviously, we need to take a cars. This will allow us to bring our equipment along with us as well." The group agrees, and they pack their bags and equipment into 2 cars. The next day, they head out to the place, where dinosaurs, are sent back to extinction.

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I hope you enjoyed this chapter, because The Final Strike is back up and running, and the next chapter is coming next Friday! Chapters are released on Saturdays on Jurassic Park Legacy

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PostSubject: Re: The Final Strike   Sat Aug 04, 2012 9:26 pm

Wait, this isn't the awesome chapter I advertised! POKES!

Seriously though, great chapter matey Razz

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